Ash before Oak by Jeremy Cooper
*(Trigger warning – this post, and indeed this book, discuss themes of breakdown and suicide)*
One of this year’s issues from the lovely Fitzcarraldo Editions, this is an intriguing piece of writing, and one which to a certain extend defies classification. Published in their blue livery, indicating fiction, it takes on the form of a diary or journal and follows the life of an unnamed male narrator. The solitary man lives in a cottage on a solitary Somerset estate which is in the process of being renovated, both by him and other locals. The narrator records the natural life around him, from the changing seasons to the trees and plants, the birds and wild creatures to the moths and butterflies. Initially, it’s hard to place the journal entries in a particular era, as simply the date without a year is given; but as the narrative progresses, references to external world events such as 9/11 are slipped in so that the reader realises this is the early part of the 21st century.
So we share our narrator’s days, as he observes moles tunnelling under his lawn, tries to tackle the cottage’s mouse problem in a humane way and interacts with his neighbours – particularly a woman called Beth, 20 years his junior. The observations of nature are beautiful and the narrative hypnotic and compelling; however, as we read it becomes clear that not all is quite right with our narrator. Cracks in the descriptions of flora and fauna allow comments to slip through which are almost asides but which reveal that the mental state of the narrator is a fragile one, and we begin to realise that he is isolated in the country for a reason, that he has been through or is going through some kind of mental trauma, and that our view of this is only going to be partial.
With neat observations I make myself seem rational and urbane.
Far from true.
As the book moves on, parts of the narrator’s past slip into the writing; his past work; his marriage, over for 20 years; his complex relationship with his family. Beth also appears regularly in the journal and we start to realise that she is more than just a neighbour, and something of a crutch to the man as he works through his issues. There are visits to a therapist; fragments of memory about his parents and the experiences of his youth; and the sense grows that the narrators is damaged by his past. However, off camera events take a dramatic turn; we see the aftermath of an attempt at self-murder; and it is touch and go as to whether our narrator will regain any kind of equilibrium.
I don’t want to say too much more which is specific about this extraordinary book because it would deaden the impact of reading it; that process is vital to the understanding of the narrator, his place in the world and what he’s going through. The gradual revealing of past and current events, the careful building up of the tapestry of his life, is done in a masterly fashion and “Ash…” needs to be read mindfully so as to pick up the nuances stitched into the narrative. It’s also a consciously literary book; it’s laced with telling references to other works and writers, such as Tolstoy’s “The Death of Ivan Ilych” and Virginia Woolf, amongst many others; and these are all discreet hints as to the narrator’s state of mind.
Accept the solitude, I tell myself, if that’s how things currently must be. It’s enough this moment to enjoy the sight of the candle-like blooms on the weeping bird cherry tree, released this year by my cuttings and clearings to flourish near the bench.
“Ash before Oak” is a remarkable and immersive piece of storytelling, and it’s a book in which the gaps are as important as the actual narrative itself. Bravely, the publisher has made use of the white space on page; each new day has a separate page of its own, and some of these only have a single line entry. This emphasises the bleakness of the days when the narrator cannot write, and if the entries had run continuously on from page to page the effect would have been severely diminished.
Although “Ash…” is a book which is extremely beautiful in places, in others it can be excruciatingly sad, charting as it does the complex mental state of a man clearly suffering a breakdown. Nevertheless, there is hope of redemption and a more positive future, with the narrator seeing chinks of light at the end of the tunnel and the ending is upbeat rather than downbeat. More than that I will not say!
I have the feeling that purpose is a spectre of man’s delusion, that it does not, did not, never will exist, that we’ve invented purpose in the hope of easing our burden while, in fact, torturing each other with the prospect. We may, quite soon, impale ourselves on purpose, extinguish the human race in our attempt to conquer meaning.
I mentioned at the start of this post that the book defies classification, and I’m going to have to explain this by delving into the knotty issue of autofiction. I’d not really thought very deeply about this as a genre before; after all, doesn’t every piece of fiction drawn to some extent on the author’s life and thoughts and actions and the events they’ve experienced? “Ash…” is described as Cooper’s first novel in over a decade, which suggests it should be read simply as fiction. It is, however, impossible to read this as anything other than autofiction, since the narrative is peppered with real people, real books and real facts; the narrator is a writer; he shares the same career trajectory as the author, such as spending many years appearing on Antiques Roadshow and having a large collection of art postcards. The narrator’s friends are real people; for example, one who wrote a book mentioned in the journals, which is actually real and available on Amazon; and the curator Jeremy Compston, who appears in the book as the narrator’s friend – Cooper has actually written a biography of him. So, much as I try not to conflate and author and their characters, by the end of this I clearly had.
This did set me thinking a little bit about autofiction in general; and in a weird kind of synchronicity, I read an article by Tim Parks on the subject just after finishing “Ash”. It was a very illuminating piece, pointing out that autofiction has existed back to the time of Dante, and quoting also Tolstoy’s use of his life in his fictions. I ended up thinking that in the past an author would use real life sources but change names, places and probably facts to make the fiction. Nowadays, the reality isn’t cloaked; instead, the *real* events, people and places feature, but still filtered through the novelist’s lens.
And at the end of that, I came to the conclusion that it actually doesn’t matter. Cooper chose to tell his story (and I’m assuming, possibly incorrectly, that it’s a story of *his* breakdown) in a fictionalised way, and that’s fine. It’s a book I found myself reading compulsively, drawn in by the imagery of the natural world around the narrator and the wish to follow his journey to whatever end it reached. In many ways, the book reads as an act of catharsis, of writing out of one’s pain, and the result is really stunning. I think it might be a good time to stop worrying about what’s fact and fiction, and just accept that there is very little written that’s actually true (I reckon most autobiographies are probably very fictionalised, for example!) Because however you want to classify it, “Ash before Oak” is a profound, moving and beautifully written work blending nature and humanity, and another winner from Fitzcarraldo.
(Just in case you’re wondering, the title is taken from a traditional country rhyme predicting the amount of rain we’re likely to have depending on which of the two trees produces leaves first! Yes, we really are obsessed with the weather in this country…!)
Jun 17, 2019 @ 06:49:21
This sounds excellent. The nature writing and the fragmentary style are really appealing. At the moment I’m sticking to comfort reads but I’ve made a note of this for the future!
Jun 17, 2019 @ 15:46:59
It is a very compelling read, one that does linger in the mind. I know what you mean about comfort reads – goodness knows we need them at the moment! But I’m trying to balance them with slightly more substantial works too!
Jun 17, 2019 @ 09:27:15
I think I know the Tim Parks article on autofiction you mention. I’m still ambivalent about it as a genre but ‘Ash’ sounds a legitimate example of this approach to narrative. Antiques Road Show, eh?!
Jun 17, 2019 @ 15:46:10
It’s a good essay, and the timing was right for it just as I finished the book. I think in the end all fiction draws from real life – it’s just that the lines are less blurred nowadays. I think the best way forward for me is not to worry about it!
Jun 17, 2019 @ 10:29:06
Sounds like an interesting read. I’ll have to have a look for the Tim Parks article, too.
Jun 17, 2019 @ 15:44:19
It is indeed very interesting and absorbing, and one that gets under your skin. The Tim Parks article is good too – it comes in a collection I’m currently reading and a review will follow!
Jun 17, 2019 @ 16:31:32
This sounds like a beautiful, powerful work. I like the idea of the natural world playing such a big part in the narrative. That idea of autofiction is interesting, some books really are hard to classify, some authors bring more of themselves into their work than others do I suppose.
Jun 17, 2019 @ 19:07:14
It really is a very unusual and absorbing work, and the nature parts are beautiful. The contrast between them and the human angst is quite striking. And yes – we can’t always put books into a single category and that’s fine actually – I like things that move outside the box! 😀
Jun 17, 2019 @ 19:25:51
Good conclusion. I too have thought about this, and I think about the autofiction-biography in terms of degrees. I believe, with A.A. Milne (and probably many other authors), that there can’t be any true biography. Memory, time, and the act of writing produce something consciously thought upon and interpreted, enhanced, simplified or adorned. In like manner, all fiction contains a slice of life, right?
I like that you said the book was very compelling, that’s a sign of a good one.
Jun 17, 2019 @ 19:57:33
Well, I think I agree with Milne – a true biography would have to be completely objective and that’s not possible. And true fiction is equally impossible, as you say, because we have to use the influences from our life. In the end, it didn’t matter here – the book was so good and so absorbing that I just wanted to read it and follow its story to the end!
Jun 18, 2019 @ 09:29:31
This sounds rather special. I’ve just finished reading A Whole Life by Robert Seethaler and it strikes me that ‘Ash’ would make a good companion read – I know the style of narration is very different but the idea of a quiet man in nature runs through both?
Jun 18, 2019 @ 11:41:25
I’ve not read A Whole Life but that’s an interesting comparison. Certainly the natural world runs through this one as a theme, and possibly some kind of agent of healing. However, there’s a dark undercurrent to the story and I wouldn’t necessarily say the narrator is a quiet man – more a troubled one, really….
Jun 19, 2019 @ 23:40:27
Oh gosh, this sounds wonderful. I’ve been buying up their non-fiction but haven’t looked very much at the fiction – as this straddles the two, I can see I’m going to need to add a blue Fitzcarraldo to my shelves. Does it keep the momentum during the descriptions of nature, or is it more of a slow and steady read?
Jun 20, 2019 @ 10:17:49
It is great – I really am loving Fitzcarraldo’s books. As for momentum, that’s hard to answer. The book is quite fat, though never felt overlong perhaps because of the short entries on some of the pages. And although it builds to a quiet crescendo in the middle the pace doesn’t flag. But reading slow and steady would be good – it’s the kind of book you can pick up and re-engage with whenever you have a moment to read.
Jun 24, 2019 @ 20:28:41
Beautiful and sad? Sounds like just my thing!
I haven’t read Park’s essay, but it sounds like common sense to say auto-fiction has existed for a long time – further confused by stories we now recognise as fiction which were presented as fact! I think it only becomes a little irritating when it is presented as a virtue in itself.
Jun 24, 2019 @ 20:49:53
It certainly is – I was so absorbed in it. And the Park essay (in fact, all of them that I’ve read so far) is excellent. Agreed – I’m not going to worry about autofiction – the only place I get uncomfortable is the modern prevalence of fictionalising historical characters, particularly other authors…
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