After the issues with the translation from last week, things have settled down a bit and I’ve now finished part 2, the first ‘war’ section of the book. I was a little apprehensive about this, to be honest, as battle scenes are not normally my thing. However, I needn’t have been, as Tolstoy, in his wisdom, focuses on more than just fighting and this part of the book was fascinating.
At the end of part one, Prince Andrei set off to war, abandoning his beautiful, young and pregnant wife – which possibly tells you a lot about Tolstoy’s attitude to marriage! Also setting off to battle was young Nikolai Rostov, eager to prove himself. This section of W&P follows both of their experiences, although they are moving in very different spheres: Nikolai is a mere cadet, but Prince Andrei has been attached to the higher ranks and is thriving.
Inevitably, we see more of Andrei’s adventures: throwing himself into battle, watching the troops move and fight, mixing with the high and mighty; and all through this his emotions fluctuate wildly. He’s obviously happy to be away from the restrictions of home and society, and in many ways has found himself within the manly structure and discipline of the army; but he has noble notions that are often dashed. Andrei has studied battle strategies and imagines these things take place like clockwork, following a plan; and his ideals are somewhat shaken by the reality of the conflict and the chaos around him.
Because chaos it certainly is, and Tolstoy captures this disorder brilliantly in a series of vignettes, conveying how it feels to be caught in the middle of a conflict with one element not knowing what the others are doing and no real cohesive command. He paints a vivid picture of the chain of command, from the generals at the top working on strategies down to the common soldier who’s the one who bears the brunt of the battle, often with his life. No-one in that chain really knowing what the overall picture is, instead dealing simply with their small area of the fighting. And it became obvious that the inability to communicate effectively was a major element in the failure of a battle – often nobody knew where they were and who they were meant to be fighting. The one successful action in this particular battle was because of a small battalion with an inspired captain who ignored orders and just fought.
However, just because this was a ‘war’ section didn’t mean there was no character development, because there was. We met a wonderful mixture of soldiers and civilians of all types, all memorable and well-drawn. I particularly warmed to Captain Tushin, the maverick soldier who kept his battalion fighting away when all around him were withdrawing; and Dolokhov, an officer reduced to the ranks, determined to redeem himself.
Somehow, despite his close-up view of the fighting, Tolstoy manages to convey the wide panorama and the sheer scale of the war. He doesn’t stint on his description of the conflict and portrays a muddy and bloody reality. Both Andrei and Nikolai enter the battle expecting one thing, some kind of nobility, and finding a very different reality. Nikolai, in particular, has his first skirmish and it’s anything but glamorous; and we leave him in a rather precarious situation at the end of the section.
So, a gripping and thrilling read, wonderfully written and capturing the gritty and confusing reality of being in the middle of an old-style battle. I found I really enjoyed it, which I wasn’t expecting – so that bodes well for the rest of the book, in particular the war sections!
Jul 17, 2017 @ 07:00:05
I am enjoying your descriptions as I am almost done with part II. I am glad to see we are thinking almost the same though your summary is much clearer than mine would be. I am enjoying it too and am also surprised. The lack of communication really is frustrating but that must happen a lot in war. Onwards and upwards. I do hate the injuries to horses though. 😊😊😊
Jul 17, 2017 @ 09:26:54
Yes, I’m not fond of seeing horses suffer either. But he really paints a picture of how confusing and messy this kind of war must have been.
Aug 02, 2017 @ 06:10:41
Yes, he is (was) good at that.
Jul 17, 2017 @ 08:15:28
I’m following this with interest and now you’ve put me to shame as I’ve ‘read’ War and Peace twice, decades apart, and skipped the war bits both times. Seems like I made a mistake there. Thanks!
Jul 17, 2017 @ 09:14:07
Well, so far the war bits are very readable – maybe because they’re about people in detail and so you feel a connection with them. Let’s hope all the war bits are like this!
Jul 17, 2017 @ 08:55:11
This sounds excellent, actually – I would have been nervous of the war sections but it sounds like he has a good organising principle and an overarching view of it all, with an aim to make things clear to the reader.
Jul 17, 2017 @ 09:11:30
I was a little apprehensive, but actually found the war section really enjoyable and readable!
Jul 17, 2017 @ 14:26:43
Congrats on your progress! It only get more exciting…
Jul 17, 2017 @ 15:53:00
That’s good to know! :))))
Jul 17, 2017 @ 14:58:12
Every novelist of consequence who writes battles scenes “focuses on more than just fighting.” Every single one.
Jul 17, 2017 @ 15:52:50
I’ll take your word for it! (I’ve not read a lot of battles!)
Jul 17, 2017 @ 18:35:12
You did a much better job of describing what Tolstoy does here. I got the same sense – you’ve got this structured, hierarchical, bureaucracy at the top, but absolute chaos and senseless slaughter on the battlefield. How is a young person like Andrei or Nikolai to make sense of it? They can’t. The way Tolstoy approaches this is both funny and frightening.
Jul 17, 2017 @ 21:34:45
It is – he’s so clever. And I’m enjoying reading everyone’s different take on it.
Jul 17, 2017 @ 19:04:29
Good that you’re reading the ‘war-bits’. You’d underestimate Tolstoy if you skipped those. Even though Tolstoy was a pacifist by the time he wrote War and Peace, he did understand the thrill of war, and what it’s like to fight for your tsar. He captures young Rostov’s excitement wonderfully, but equally wonderful is how he describes what his family feels like, with him off to war. But I don’t think you’ve read that yet;-) happy reading 📖
Jul 17, 2017 @ 21:34:07
Enjoying it – and well into part three! I shall try not to skip anything!!
Jul 18, 2017 @ 07:38:00
Glad you’re still enjoying War and Peace. I remember the battle scenes were probably not my favourite ( I preferred the scenes on the country estate or at balls etc) but were definitely very gripping.
Jul 18, 2017 @ 09:23:02
Yes, they are – not a thing I’d usually choose to read, but Tolstoy writes them so well!
Jul 19, 2017 @ 20:33:00
Great to hear you’re enjoying it! I was also surprised that I didn’t mind the ”war’ sections as its not really my thing. Dolokhov is my favourite character (I’m not particularly proud of this!)
Jul 19, 2017 @ 20:56:01
Shhhh. I’m quite fond of Dolokhov too. Andrei’s a bit of a prig, tbh, and Rostov a callow youth. I’m sure they’ll develop….